THE GREATEST OF THEM ALL BY JOHN

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After much anticipation, John releases his first official poem titled the greatest of them all. Don’t forget to tell your friends about the poem and to comment too. Thanks fam

THE GREATEST OF THEM ALL
      Oh!!, you are the greatest of them all
      With great luminaries to your call
      In magnificent scenery you abound
      Sculptural edifices with a unique sound
      Where a great man was born

      Oh!! You are the most articulate of them all
      With great strength you pronounce the name
      As flocks spell bounded in plenty
      The tall, the slim the short and the plump,
      The cultured and uncultured
      In massive ostentation we assemble
      To brood a young generation

      Oh! You are the most patient of them all
      Time is nothing but a flat circle ball
      In the hand of chastisers we subdue
      With the instrument of social instrument due
      As days transcends it’s elasticity
      We do wait on your call as an entity
      Time bewrays only just a mirage
      There a patient mind will dwell

      Oh! you are the mother of them all
      To you others pay homage
      You Settle for nothing but the best
      In eyries great beings are shaped
      And with prudish tug,Virtue is backed
      As the session goes nigh
      Here,there,and then you conceive
      Something extraordinarily within.

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15 Comments Add yours

    1. john says:

      Tnx bro.

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    2. john says:

      Tnx ..

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  1. Yemisi says:

    Very nice poem by my young barrister,which was deeply reasoned….My daily motivation,What else can i say; I am the greatest of them all.

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  2. Goodness says:

    Nice work from John, I’m impressed.

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  3. wisdomite olamide says:

    lovely

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  4. Nawtee says:

    Interesting

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  5. pholookeh says:

    Great poem and nice diction. Work more on the ending. I was enjoying it and I had no idea it was about to end. I don’t know much about poetry but I think you should give us a hint that you are drawing towards conclusion. Good job. It was impressive

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  6. Enene Igbecha says:

    Beautiful piece of art. Excellent delivery and truly inspiring words. Thank you. Looking forward to more. I am the Greatest! You are the Greatest! God bless you.

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  7. Eskay says:

    make sense piece John… keep up the good work

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  8. ebube says:

    Nice piece

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  9. siju says:

    it is really nyc, i lyk ur choice of words.

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  10. siju says:

    it is really nice john, i lyk ur choice of words.

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  11. debbyqte says:

    Very good diction!

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